- long shot of girl sitting on beach
- medium close up of waves breaking
- close up of girl
- close up of waves, car headlights flash (in girl head) when waves break
- low angle of girl
- high angle of girl, zoom to girl's shoes (barefoot on beach?) while girl stands up
- tracking close up of girl's feet walking on beach, then up stairs
- over the shoulder of girl walking up stairs
- medium close up of girl standing still opposite boot of a car (she reads the number plate)
- point of view of number plate
FLASHBACK starts:
- fade to long shot (tilt?) of same car standing in street at night.
boot open. man standing by car. point of view of man opening boot. only a briefcase is to be seen, rest is hidden under a blanket
- long shot of girl stumbling into street drunk. man doesn't notice girl
- close up of girl's face noticing the car
(- close up of girl's hand holding high heels, she is barefoot)
- medium close up of man outside car getting a briefcase out of the trunk
- over the shoulder close up of man getting briefcase
- close up of hand falling from behind blanket.
- close up of girl's face noticing
- point of view of man hiding hand behind blanket
-medium close up of man looking around (but not back) to see if anyone saw the hand. he does not notice girl. it's dark so man's face is unrecognisable.
- tracking medium close up shot of man closing boot and getting into car.
- long shot of car driving off
- close up of girl's face astonished/confused, decides she was only imagining the hand because she's drunk
- long shot of car driving off
- medium close up of number plate. FLASHBACK END.
fade to medium close up of same number plate on same car on beach.
- head and shoulder close up of girl looking doubtful/ confused/ intrigued.
scene end.
Well done Serena, I don't think you need the briefcase - just the girl's hand is chilling enough and adds to the mystery.
ReplyDeleteYour shots of the film you have done thus far are splendid. Well done to all of you, great composition, camera angles, lighting.